Broken^Minded^Warrior

Thank you, Colt! Your crit is very helpful! (Seriously, it is!) Sorry about all the misspelled words... my brother turned off all of the spell checks... Also, welcome to YWS! ...

Thanks for critiquing! I'll fix the mistakes that x0xGilmore Girliex0x pointed out. And yes, the italics did get messed up, and I'll try to fix those up, also! And if ...